马上要英语口试,写了个自我介绍,不知道有没有错误,找人改改..
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马上要英语口试,写了个自我介绍,不知道有没有错误,找人改改.....在线等 Good morning teachers,I am very happy to stand here. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is --, 20 ye 贺词赠言您正在浏览的文章来自寄语大全 请您牢记本站地址 www.shmaihua.cn
马上要英语口试,写了个自我介绍,不知道有没有错误,找人改改.....在线等
Good morning teachers,I am very happy to stand here. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is --, 20 year old, I graduated from Qianxi NO.two high School,In my spare time I often read English story books and listening to English songs .Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E- books to read. I also like the painting , I think painting can improve people's aesthetic taste and character cultivation.Now, my dream is to become an English teacher, for my dreams I'll keep trying I think this is a very good chance to let me go further on English,so I will do my best to catch the chance.
如果没有错误,语气比较僵硬的地方帮忙换换。。。拜托了。。。。
满意答案:
你好,首先祝你旗开得胜,我是今年的高考生,英语成绩在145左右(只看来答案,成绩没有下来)。
平时英语是强项,如果你是一个爱学习的好学生,可以加我qq,以后有什么问题我们都可以一起探讨。
下面我帮你改改这篇作文:
Good morning后要加逗号,20 year old中的year要用复数形式,Qianxi NO.two high School改为No.2 High School in Qianxi, and listening 改为and listen,like the painting 改为like painting ,people's aesthetic taste 中的taste后加s。错误就是这些,如果说句子的话,(不要生气)不是很好,没有高级句子,高级句型,过渡词语没有用好。
下面,我帮你写写,一定要采纳哦(呵呵)
Good morning,teachers. So hornour to stand here to introduce myself.
My name is --, a 20-year-old graduate who graduated from NO.2 High School in Qianxi.In my spare time I often read English books and listen to English songs. meantime, I always surf the Internet and download the E- books to read,by which Ican impaove my English and enrich my life.
Besides,I'm fond of painting ,which I think can improve people's aesthetic tastes and character cultivations.Now, my dream is to become an English teacher, for which I'll keep trying best.
.Because I take this a very good chance to go further on English, I value this chance so much taht I will do my best to catch the chance. 补充:meantime 第一个字母要大写,不好意思。 追问:
你QQ多少啊?谢谢你这么认真,交个朋友吧,嘻嘻。。。。你也可以加我qq870124978
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